Mission Maker Story (modified)
Posted by Nancy on October 19, 2007
Ok, I have to create a new story. The last one I made might not have been good enough to make a picture of the game in your mind. Now, this NEW one is going to be improved… well, here it goes…
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It was once said that 5 of the most valuable, powerful but dangerous items ,which had belonged to the greek gods, were stolen by a mysterious and unknown spy. Professor .D. Henzo, half genius achaeologist, brave and valiant, sets out on instinct to retrieve the artefacts before it gets into the wrong hands to cause major havoc. However the enchanted equiptments were guarded by spells and weapons. The journey would not be safe…..
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Well thats it… What do YOU think?? Is it any different from my old one? How can I improve it –”?
November 2nd, 2007 at 1:57 pm
I love it Nancy, you have made the hero Professor D Henzo sound very brave. I wonder what spells and enchantments you will make in your game? I can’t wait to try your game
November 27th, 2007 at 10:15 pm
hi its ainsley
i think that it is great
i dont really think you need to improve i any more its fine the way it is.
visit my blog
bye bye
December 10th, 2007 at 11:26 am
Thanks, though I wish I put in a little more humor in it.. imagin Zues flirting in the middle of a game >
December 11th, 2007 at 7:05 pm
Hi Nancy,
WOW! That is really good. I think you need to tell the fait of you and the world if the artifacts are put into someone elses hands. Bye
Naomi