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Archive for October 19th, 2007

Mission Maker Story (modified)

Posted by Nancy on 19th October 2007

Ok, I have to create a new story. The last one I made might not have been good enough to make a picture of the game in your mind. Now, this NEW one is going to be improved… well,  here it goes…

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It was once said that 5 of the most valuable, powerful but dangerous items ,which had belonged to the greek gods, were stolen by a mysterious and unknown spy. Professor .D. Henzo, half genius achaeologist, brave and valiant, sets out on instinct to retrieve the artefacts before it gets into the wrong hands to cause major havoc. However the enchanted equiptments were guarded by spells and weapons. The journey would not be safe…..

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Well thats it… What do YOU think?? Is it any different from my old one? How can I improve it –”?   

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